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Tears of the Heart by heretimestandsstill Tears of the Heart by heretimestandsstill
Don’t you see that these tears of mine,
Will always be those of my heart,
Everyday you change,
Sending my head in a spin,
I hear your voice,
And it hurts me inside,
Every time we meet,
We get a little closer,
To being the one thing that scares you.

I see you now,
In the memories of my heart,
I cant believe,
I let myself be here again.
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:icon2freya6:
AMAZING..*_*
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:iconleibka:
this is very beautiful i love how the blues all blend together in the photo. i would however liked to see the drop as a more red. the contrast between the soft blue and a bright red would have really been captivating with the poem.

however, still an amazing piece. :)
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:iconheretimestandsstill:
Thanks very much, its nice to hear a bit of constructive criticism for once :D
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:iconleibka:
haha no prob :)

i really do enjoy this piece :D
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:iconbear69designs:
bear69designs Nov 6, 2006
Every time we meet,
We get a little closer,
To being the one thing that scares you.



That is a nice, strong phrase :clap:
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:iconheretimestandsstill:
Thank you :)

All my poetry reflects my feelings ... I guess thats why I've been coming up with the good stuff lately :D

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:iconimperfectdysfunction:
wow. great colours and yes.. i like it. a lot.
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:iconheretimestandsstill:
:D thanks that means alot

:hug:

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:iconimperfectdysfunction:
you're very welcome :)
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