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I haven't taken a breath,
Since we last spoke,
And suffocating never felt so good.

My body is screaming,
For much more than air,
I feel weakened,
As I wait to see you again.

I feel myself sinking,
Darkness covers my soul,
My heart is slowing,
As my starved lungs die.

My mind is waiting,
To see you again,
As my body is buried,
I will wait here,
Until you return,
To revive me.

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Tears of the Heartby ~heretimestandsstill

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Don’t you see that these tears of mine,
Will always be those of my heart,
Everyday you change,
Sending my head in a spin,
I hear your voice,
And it hurts me inside,
Every time we meet,
We get a little closer,
To being the one thing that scares you.

I see you now,
In the memories of my heart,
I cant believe,
I let myself be here again.

~2freya6 Aug 9, 2008

AMAZING..*_*

~heretimestandsstill Aug 10, 2008

Haha thanks

~leIBka May 14, 2007

this is very beautiful i love how the blues all blend together in the photo. i would however liked to see the drop as a more red. the contrast between the soft blue and a bright red would have really been captivating with the poem.

however, still an amazing piece.

~heretimestandsstill May 14, 2007

Thanks very much, its nice to hear a bit of constructive criticism for once

~leIBka May 14, 2007

haha no prob

i really do enjoy this piece

!bear69designs Nov 6, 2006

Every time we meet,
We get a little closer,
To being the one thing that scares you.

That is a nice, strong phrase

~heretimestandsstill Nov 6, 2006

Thank you

All my poetry reflects my feelings ... I guess thats why I've been coming up with the good stuff lately

~imperfectdysfunction Nov 4, 2006

wow. great colours and yes.. i like it. a lot.

~heretimestandsstill Nov 4, 2006

thanks that means alot

~imperfectdysfunction Nov 4, 2006

you're very welcome

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